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Feedback. It’s one of the most important aspects of the filmmaking process. Whether it’s a script in development or the director’s cut of a feature film that’s in post-production, feedback is crucial every step of the way. Unfortunately, it’s stressful to receive, depending on the kind of feedback and from who.
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A screenwriter can’t control the type of feedback they’ll receive. The truth is, the only thing most people want to hear is, “Brilliant,” “Don’t change a thing,” “This is a masterpiece,” but that rarely happens. For most people in the industry, the fear of having your work rejected, hated or panned is a brutal reality. The more you write, the more you’ll experience it and the more successful you become, the more you’ll receive from people higher up the food chain.
I can’t promise you that the three techniques I’m going to tell you about will prevent negative feedback, but hopefully these exercises can help you write well developed characters and receive a positive reception.
By the way, did you know SoCreate has an incredible feedback tool? You can share your story directly with the SoCreate community for feedback from multiple sources, all aggregated into notes on the same draft where you can easily access them. Or, with our Pro Plan, generate a private link to share your script or parts of it for feedback. You can also see Feedback Stats that show if someone read your script, how long they spent on each scene, and where they got hung up. Try it today from your SoCreate Dashboard!
“The movie is headed in the wrong direction,” the president of the company said in the meeting the following morning after a test screening at the Arc Light. I remember wanting to sink into my chair as he went on with the problems of the latest cut.
“We’re at risk of not getting a theatrical release,” the kiss of death to any feature film and, quite honestly, a career killer if you don’t have any box office hits as a director.
The test screening wasn’t a disaster, but the scores and response were below expectations, sending red lights flashing with the producers that substantial changes were ahead.
In the coming weeks, we’d screen the movie to screenwriters, who’d pitch their ideas for a new third act. Eventually, we’d settle on one, shoot it, edit it, and test-screen the updated version, this time getting a positive response and scoring higher.
Test screenings, an important part of the filmmaking process, are where you show the film while it’s still a work in progress. Some producers I’ve worked with start screening the film before an audience after the first cut when it’s in its rawest form: no visual effects, composed music, or mixed sound. For the editing crew, it’s stressful because you’re showing something that might only be 25 percent of the way through the editing process. That’s like having someone read a script where you’re only 25 percent through the process to completing a final draft.
Test screenings are where the filmmakers' expectations collide with reality. Most of the rough-cut screenings in my career have been cold responses: the audience doesn’t laugh at the jokes, understand why characters behave at certain points in the story, or the ending doesn’t pay off.
Most filmmakers behave like they’re the smartest person in the room, but when they put their work in front of an audience, it’s humbling, and the audience isn’t wrong. Many times, I’ve been in the lobby after the screening where the director screams, “They didn’t get the film,” or “Idiots, all of them, who recruited these people?” The problem was never the audience; the movie wasn’t working.
You need this feedback to know if your movie is working or not working. The most positive aspect of a screening is figuring out why it’s not working and coming up with solutions. That's what smart editors do.
Writers, think how important it is to show early drafts of your script to get feedback on your story. Think about some of the most constructive feedback (not compliments or adulation) you’ve gotten: when you find out your ending doesn’t work, or the reader doesn’t understand a character’s motivation (or you realize your character lacks motivation), and the reader not only pointed out the problem but also offered good solutions to solve your script problems. How important is it to get that feedback on every draft?
Often, how a movie scores is dependent on how much the audience likes the lead character. If it scores in the 80 percent to 90 percent, then there’s a good chance the audience will like the lead character 8 to 9 on a 1 to 10 scale.
One of the best ways to develop a character (not necessarily likable characters) is a writing exercise known as The Conversation. For the screenwriter, it’s taking out a blank piece of paper, opening a Word document or a screenwriting app like SoCreate Writer, and having a conversation with a character in the script that you write. Don’t force anything; just write a conversation where you, the writer, are one character, and someone from your script is another character. Just have a conversation with the character and see where it goes. Don’t try to put a scenario, conflict, or story in the conversation. This is a “get to you know” dialogue between the writer and the character.
Let the conversation go on for as long as you like. Don’t worry about length: the conversation might be one page, twenty pages, or 100 pages. Just write until you feel it’s run its course.
If you feel like you’ve exhausted a scenario, close your eyes, wait for an image to come into your mind based on an interest you and the character have, and start following your character around.
One of the best ways to develop a character (not necessarily likable characters) is a writing exercise known as The Conversation. For the screenwriter, it’s taking out a blank piece of paper, opening a Word document or a screenwriting app like SoCreate Writer, and having a conversation with a character in the script that you write. Don’t force anything; just write a conversation where you, the writer, are one character, and someone from your script is another character. Just have a conversation with the character and see where it goes. Don’t try to put a scenario, conflict, or story in the conversation. This is a “get to you know” dialogue between the writer and the character.
Let the conversation go on for as long as you like. Don’t worry about length: the conversation might be one page, twenty pages, or 100 pages. Just write until you feel it’s run its course.
If you feel like you’ve exhausted a scenario, close your eyes, wait for an image to come into your mind based on an interest you and the character have, and start following your character around.
Look at this exercise like a first date. Think about when you first meet someone, you want to discuss whimsical topics like favorite restaurants, food, and travel. No politics or religion, those topics will come later.
Once you’ve done this exercise several times with your character, the conversation can progress to a deeper level. This is where you can allow the conversation to have a sense of exploration. Open yourself up and be willing to talk about anything. No topic is taboo or off-limits.
The first few times you try this exercise, don’t try to push yourself to go deeper if you don’t feel comfortable with it. Over time, as you become more comfortable having these conversations, go ahead and talk about their fears, failures, and dark secrets from the past that no one knows about. Take a leap and plunge into their past, psyche, and emotions. Don’t be afraid about the quality of your conversation or your writing. There’s no right answer to this exercise. Let yourself go and write from outside your comfort zone.
When you’re experienced enough with this exercise, write the conversation on paper that you couldn’t have with anyone in real life. Then, you can start becoming revelatory, but only when you feel experienced enough. Don’t force anything until then.
Try doing this exercise for 45-60 minutes a day, every day, until you are comfortable with writing conversations with your characters. Then, use this conversation technique to develop your characters. This is a great exercise to start your writing day. It’s something you can do when you first come up with an idea for a character and you’re in the preliminary stages of figuring out who they are.
The next progression of character development from The Conversation technique is The Interview. This is where you start asking the character questions, and they answer them. Think of this process as outlining, but instead of a plot, you’re outlining a character. It’s one of the best ways to develop your character and make them feel like real people. It also gives you a chance to write in their voice.
Before you interview your character:
Come up with five questions you don’t know the answer to.
Don’t brainstorm the answers. Let the characters answer the questions in the moment when you ask them while you’re writing.
Let your character answer these questions from an intuitive place. Don’t try to have any preconceived ideas of what you want to write. Remember, there’s no right answer to these questions.
Like The Conversation technique, the questions and answers don’t have to be high stakes or crazy. Don’t impose situations, conflict or story during the interview.
Start out with basic questions. Keep the interview simple. Look at it as a tiny dance. Make the interview a conversation, not an interrogation.
This is a writing technique where you should embrace the clumsiness of it. Don’t worry if you don’t like the questions or answers during the interview. Just let yourself go and see where the answers take your character.
Questions you can ask during an interview:
What is your name?
Where were you born?
Where did you grow up?
What is your favorite color?
When you were eight years old what did you want more than anything?
When you can’t sleep at night, what do you do?
Does your name have any meaning/history?
Do you have any nicknames?
What is your age?
As you become more experienced with this technique, you can start asking deeper questions:
What is your greatest physical attribute?
What do you hate about yourself?
What is your darkest childhood memory?
Do you remember your first kiss?
What did you want to be when you grew up?
Have you ever hated someone enough to wish something terrible happened to them?
What is the worst thing you've ever done?
What is your biggest regret?
What are you afraid of?
What do you want?
What do you need?
This list of questions can go on forever, so I’ll leave more at the end of this blog.
Unlike The Conversation and The Interview which involves the writer interacting with the character to develop them, this one is called The Follow Around Technique or what I like to call, The Brian DePalma Technique.
For those of you familiar with Brian DePalma’s work, all his movies have long Steadicam shots that go un-cut for several minutes. There are a couple of famous ones, including the opening of “Bonfire of the Vanities” or the Grand Central Station chase in “Carlito’s Way.”
Here are those amazing shots:
These Steadicam shots would be one long continuous take that follows a character upstairs, into elevators, down hallways, through doorways, down escalators, and on and on. Most of the time DePalma used these shots to build suspense. As a writer you can do that, but this technique gives you a chance to see their behavior and get a feel for them.
Take a blank piece of paper, a blank document on your word doc, or a new document in your screenwriting app like SoCreate Writer and close your eyes. What’s the first image that comes into your mind based on an interest you and your character have?
Starting writing based on the image and follow that character around. How you write your text during a follow around doesn’t matter. You could write prose, dialogue if it comes up, or it could be in screenplay format. Whichever format you’re most comfortable with, write in that format and you can switch off to any other style during this exercise. If you’re following a character through a gun shop and they start talking to the clerk behind the counter, start writing in dialogue form. If they don’t talk at all then write in prose or screenplay format. It doesn’t matter. Just keep your fingers typing and keep following your character around.
You can follow them around in different situations, locations, interreacting with different characters, different phases of their life, wherever and whenever your interests lead you and the character.
Like The Conversation and The Interview, don’t impose situations, conflict, or story during the follow around. Let the character’s behavior be organic in mundane situations. You’re just seeing and getting a feel for their inner life and emotional depth.
If you need to re-write a character, this technique can help you develop those changes.
All three of these exercises were designed to help you get a better feel for your characters regardless of what stage you’re at in your script. You can never know your character too well, but your movie could suffer if you don’t know them enough.
I can’t promise that doing these exercises will result in fully fleshed out characters on par with Travis Bickle, Hamlet or Holden Caulfield, but it will help you give your actors a chance to work with strong material.
Hopefully, this material leads to good storytelling and high scores at the test screenings!
Please feel free to leave comments and suggestions on these writing exercises. We’d love to hear your input.
What is your height?
What is your weight?
How are you built (skinny, big, stocky, muscular, etc.)?
What is your face shape?
What is your hair color?
How do you style your hair?
What is your eye color?
What is your eye shape?
Do you wear glasses or contact lenses? If glasses, what style?
Do you have any distinguishing facial features?
What is your most prominent facial feature?
What is your most prominent bodily feature?
What is your skin tone?
What is your race/ethnicity?
Do you wear makeup?
Do you have any scars, birthmarks, or tattoos?
Do you have any physical handicaps or disabilities?
What type of clothes do you typically wear (at home, at work, out on the town, in bed)?
Do you wear any kind of jewelry or accessories?
What type of shoes do you wear?
Do you have any mannerisms?
Would you say you're in good health?
Are there any words or phrases that you overuse?
What about catchphrases?
Are you a glass-half-full or glass-half-empty type of person?
Are you more introverted or extroverted?
What makes you laugh?
What is your love language? How do you show affection?
Do you have any mental disabilities?
What do you want others to think about you?
How do you see yourself?
What is your strongest aspect?
How competitive are you?
Do you act on impulse or carefully think through decisions?
What happens if someone praises your work?
What is your greatest fear?
What is your biggest secret that you've never told anyone?
What is the purpose of life?
When did you last cry?
What haunts you?
What are your political views?
What will you stand for?
Who do you quote most often?
Do you prefer the indoors or outdoors?
What is your guilty pleasure?
What personal trait do you rely on the most?
What do you value most in a friend?
If you could change one thing about yourself, what would it be?
What are you obsessed with?
What are your pet peeves?
What is your greatest regret?
Do you have a large family? Who are they?
What do you think of your family?
What is your current relationship with your parents?
Do you have siblings? Where do you come in?
Describe your best friend.
Who is your ideal best friend?
Who are your other friends?
Do you make friends easily?
Do you have any pets?
Who do you naturally get along with?
Do you believe in love at first sight?
Are you in a relationship?
How do you act in a relationship?
How many relationships have you had?
How do you break up with someone?
Have you ever been in love?
Has anyone broken your heart?
Who do you trust?
Do you live with anyone? How do you get along with them>
How do you get along with your neighbors? Why?
How would your family describe you?
How would your significant other describe you?
How would your boss describe you?
How would your enemy describe you?
What were you like as a baby/child?
Did you grow up rich or poor?
Were you nurtured or neglected in childhood?
What is the most offensive thing a person has ever said to you?
What has been your greatest achievement?
How was your first kiss?
What was the worst thing you did to someone you love?
What is your greatest ambition?
What advice would you give your younger self?
What smells remind you of your home/your childhood?
What did you want to be when you grow up? Did it work out?
What is your favorite childhood memory?
Did you have any imaginary friends as a child?
What are you most ashamed of?
What are you most proud of?
Has anyone saved your life?
Were you bullied as a child?
What is the most embarrassing thing to ever happen to you?
What are your values?
What is the worst thing that can be done to a person?
What is freedom?
When did you last lie?
What is your view of lying?
Do you keep your promises?
Who is your hero?
If you could save one person, who would it be?
What is your favorite proverb?
Do you believe in happy endings?
What is happiness?
What is your dream job?
What do you like to spend money on?
What is something you would never do?
What is something you would do that might surprise people?
Are you a leader, a follower, or a lone wolf?
Would you trade 10 years of your life for money, beauty, intelligence?
How do you respond to a threat?
Do you prefer fighting with your fists or using diplomacy?
What is your kryptonite?
Your house is burning down and you can only save one thing. What is it?
How do you view strangers?
What do you love to hate?
What are your phobias?
What is your ideal weapon?
Who do you most despise in the world?
What do you do when you get angry?
Who are your enemies? Why?
You witness a victimless crime. What do you do?
You're at a bar and someone spills your drink. What do you do?
Are you a forgiving person?
Is there anything in your past that you can't forgive?
What are your bad habits?
What is your job?
What do you think about your job?
What other jobs have you had?
What are your hobbies?
What is your educational background?
Would you describe yourself as intelligent?
Do you have any specialist training?
Are you naturally talented at anything?
Do you or have you played a sport?
What is your socioeconomic position?
What is in your fridge?
What is in your car?
What kind of car do you drive?
What is in your pocket?
What is your most treasured posession?
Do you keep anything under your pillow? Next to your bed?
What are your eating habits?
Do you have any allergies?
What does your home look like?
Minimalist or hoarder?
Are you organized or disorganized?
Are you forgetful or easily distracted?
Right brain or left brain?
What do you do first on a weekend?
What do you do first on a weekday?
What do you do on Sunday afternoon?
What do you do on a Friday night?
Are you comfortable with technology?
How do you like to celebrate your birthday?
What do you think about when you can't sleep?
What keeps you up at night?
What is your morning routine?
If you could relive any day of your life, what would it be?
What is your favorite color?
What is your favorite animal?
What place would you like to visit the most?
What is the most beautiful thing you have ever seen?
What is your favorite song?
What type of art do you prefer? (fine art, music, reading, film, etc.)
What is your password?
What is your favorite food?
What is your favorite movie?
What TV show can you binge all day long?
Who is your favorite musician?
What is your favorite alcoholic drink?
What is your favorite non-alcoholic drink?
If you could have a superpower, what would it be?
Who could be your guardian angel?
Do you believe in the afterlife?
What religion do you follow?
Do you believe in heaven or hell?
What do you think it's like in heaven or hell?
Are you superstitious?
If you could be reincarnated, what would you like to be reincarnated as?
What is your spirit animal?
How would you like to die?
What is your zodiac sign?
What is your Chinese horoscope?
What is your motto or mantra for life?